Espanole tarea help!!!!

I'm totally in Spanish Mode right now. I just did a load of spanish homework- tarea. For you spanish peeps out there- could you proof read this so I have a good grade?? Tell me if this makes sense!

SPANISH VERSION:

Hola. Que tal? Me llamo es Amy. Me gusta escribir cuentos, montar en bicicleta y escuchar musica moderna.  Soy a veces gracioso y mostly paciente. Soy ni trabajadora ni perezosa. Mi favorita actividad es voleibol! Soy jugar voleibol con amigos mucho. A veces actividads no me gusta nada...tocar el guitarra y montar en monopatin. Jugar videojuegos? No mucho. Bailar? Que asco! Soy, no es reservado, talentoso y a veces a deportista. Que te gusta hacer? Y que no te gusta hacer...adios!


ENGLISH TRANSLATION ( I THINK):
Hello. What's up? My name is Amy. I like to write stories,ride bikes and listen to modern music . Sometimes I'm funny and mostly patient. I'm not hardworking or lazy. My favorite activity is volleyball! I play volleyball with friends much. Sometimes I do not like activites ... playing guitar and skateboarding are one of these. Playing video games? Not much. Dancing? That sucks! I'm, not reserved, and sometimes a talented athlete. What do you like to do? And you do not like to do ... bye!


KEY:
Spanish: Bolded
English: Regular

-You know what I also wish? I wish there was an answer key for free, on the Saxon Math Course 2 for 7th grade!!!!

-¿Sabes lo que también deseo? Me gustaría que hubiera una clave de respuestas de forma gratuita, en el Curso de Matemáticas Saxon 2 para el 7 º grado!!!

-Well bye!

-Bueno, adiós

This is a pic of my favorite quote ever!

--You have to take the good with the bad, smile when you're sad, love what you've got and remember what you've had. Always forgive but never forget, learn from your mistakes but never regret, people change and things go wrong, just remember that life goes on.